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  1. Posted: August 17, 2019In: SciFi

    A Mafia family in grave danger after testifying against a notorious organized crime figure are invited to take part in an experimental government witness protection program where their consciousnesses will be uploaded to a simulated reality.

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    Added an answer on August 18, 2019 at 11:52 am

    Building on Richiev's ?When their consciousness is uploaded into a virtual reality world as part of a new witness protection program, a mafia don must protect his family against the notorious organized crime figure they testified against, who has followed them.?

    Building on Richiev’s ?When their consciousness is uploaded into a virtual reality world as part of a new witness protection program, a mafia don must protect his family against the notorious organized crime figure they testified against, who has followed them.?

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  2. Posted: August 9, 2019In: Superhero

    A 15 year old child prodigy who was born with amazing powers and abilities must unwittingly use those powers to save the city of Boston from a psychotic superpowered cult leader with the help of his equally reluctant and estranged grandfather…a former criminal genius supervillain.

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    Added an answer on August 10, 2019 at 4:59 am

    I like the idea of SuperHero/SuperVillain family dynamics. Could be fun twist on super hero movies :) The kids dad is a supervillain now he forced to be one. He instead decides to use his superpowers for good and enlists his grandad to help him. How about: "A 15 year supervillain turns superhero andRead more

    I like the idea of SuperHero/SuperVillain family dynamics. Could be fun twist on super hero movies 🙂 The kids dad is a supervillain now he forced to be one. He instead decides to use his superpowers for good and enlists his grandad to help him. How about:

    “A 15 year supervillain turns superhero and enlists the help of his supervillain grandpa to save his city from a psychotic super-powered cult leader.”

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  3. Posted: August 8, 2019In: Horror

    When a small town is terrorized by killer deer, an underachieving Park Ranger and her trainee must track down the source of the outbreak while keeping themselves and the townspeople from becoming the endangered species.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2019 at 7:35 am

    This reads great to me. Nice work. I would maybe think about an a description for 'Trainee' as well. Something like 'inept trainee' or 'over-eager trainee' whatever you had in mind for that character. I also like the idea that they might be 'zombie reindeer' :) instead of regular deers. Reindeer's aRead more

    This reads great to me. Nice work. I would maybe think about an a description for ‘Trainee’ as well. Something like ‘inept trainee’ or ‘over-eager trainee’ whatever you had in mind for that character. I also like the idea that they might be ‘zombie reindeer’ 🙂 instead of regular deers. Reindeer’s a generally bigger and more intimidating animals in the wild I believe.

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