1. Posted: December 10, 2015In:

    A trans-woman reflects on key moments in her life as a boy while visiting her home town to exact revenge against the man who had her wrongfully imprisoned.

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    1. I'm not sure if its ideal to use generic/vague words like "reflects & wrongfully" ; Could you be more specific!? 2. Can we know who "the man" is? Step-Father / Bully @ school / work-place / Manipulative-Ex-Boyfriend? 3. Most importantly, where is the man in her life now? Is she even aware ofRead more

    1. I’m not sure if its ideal to use generic/vague words like “reflects & wrongfully” ; Could you be more specific!?
    2. Can we know who “the man” is? Step-Father / Bully @ school / work-place / Manipulative-Ex-Boyfriend?
    3. Most importantly, where is the man in her life now? Is she even aware of her existence, or was she just 1 of the many whose lives he had ruined?

    Hope this helps, make your idea stronger….

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  2. Posted: December 10, 2015In:

    Draft2: The Rough-Cut! A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? & promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Dad (a Celebrated-Police-Officer!). But the son is on the ?Other-Side? of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect: The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

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    First-Stop...Thanks!!! Now to answer u... It is ?the Fathers story. But yeah, u r right, i need to make it clear in the log-line too... :) Cheers!

    First-Stop…Thanks!!!

    Now to answer u… It is ?the Fathers story. But yeah, u r right, i need to make it clear in the log-line too… 🙂

    Cheers!

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  3. Posted: December 7, 2015In:

    When an angel is tasked with showing a suicidal woman what the world would be like if she had never been born, he struggles to find a reason for her to live when they discovers it would be a vvastly better wold without her.

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    I suggest u chk out http://m.imdb.com/title/tt0038650/ Wil def help u make ur idea better...

    I suggest u chk out

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