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When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.
Use of the word "very" is interesting. Is it intentional, as it feels like you are trying to draw the readers attention to that fact. "Builds" should be, "build" in my opinion. In terms of the final line, "they're under more pressure than they have ever imagined" it doesn't seem entirely necessary iRead more
Use of the word “very” is interesting. Is it intentional, as it feels like you are trying to draw the readers attention to that fact. “Builds” should be, “build” in my opinion. In terms of the final line, “they’re under more pressure than they have ever imagined” it doesn’t seem entirely necessary if this pressure is referring to the closure that is mentioned at the start. If this pressure is something different it may be a good idea to specify what this pressure is, or the thought may seem redundant.
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