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  1. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    With a touch, Lissa can see one's true love, just never her own. When Skeptic Magazine sends their top reporter to interview her, will she dare to fall in love again?

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:20 am

    Her flaw is that she can't see her own true love. Because she needs to touch you to do a reading, she can't do herself. Thanks though! I'll work on it!

    Her flaw is that she can’t see her own true love. Because she needs to touch you to do a reading, she can’t do herself. Thanks though! I’ll work on it!

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  2. Posted: December 17, 2012In: Public

    When a young man with a tendency to say the wrong thing at the worst moment discovers an alternate universe where everyone says exactly what they mean, he finally feels like he can fit in, but as he loses track of which reality is which, he risks losing his job, his friends and the girl he has been trying so hard to win over.

    grambofof
    Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 4:49 pm

    I would probably say "awkward" rather than "big mouth," which leaves a sour taste in my mind. I feel like I could rewrite it for you, but that's not the point. However, that does mean that I can see what you're going for, and I like the idea.

    I would probably say “awkward” rather than “big mouth,” which leaves a sour taste in my mind. I feel like I could rewrite it for you, but that’s not the point. However, that does mean that I can see what you’re going for, and I like the idea.

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    An overwhelmed single-father, hesitantly adopts the 10-year-old daughter of a former love who is about to die, only to learn the young girl is actually his.

    grambofof
    Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 4:38 pm

    I like this one much better than the first. I can clearly see the protagonist, and the struggle and conflict that he has to go through to accept adopting the 10-year-old before finding out that she is actually his.

    I like this one much better than the first. I can clearly see the protagonist, and the struggle and conflict that he has to go through to accept adopting the 10-year-old before finding out that she is actually his.

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