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  1. Posted: August 14, 2013

    A man with no memory is trapped in a mysterious hotel, controlled by an oppressive host who forces him to to catch a killer among the guests in exchange for the truth of his identity.

    Greg Derochie
    Added an answer on August 16, 2013 at 2:58 am

    A revision: A young couple must solve the mystery of their imprisonment in a surreal hotel masquerade ball to recover their lost memories.

    A revision:
    A young couple must solve the mystery of their imprisonment in a surreal hotel masquerade ball to recover their lost memories.

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  2. Posted: August 15, 2013In: Public

    When a lonely, aging Aussie truckie finds a city girl online, he must reveal a deathly secret to win her.

    Greg Derochie
    Added an answer on August 16, 2013 at 2:54 am

    I agree that this makes it sound like the truck driver is the creepy antagonist. If not, maybe you're trying to say he must reveal his darkest secret to win her love? Not sure the logline is suggesting enough of a plot line. And it sends mixed signals about genre. is it a love story? is its a thrillRead more

    I agree that this makes it sound like the truck driver is the creepy antagonist. If not, maybe you’re trying to say he must reveal his darkest secret to win her love? Not sure the logline is suggesting enough of a plot line. And it sends mixed signals about genre. is it a love story? is its a thriller?

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  3. Posted: August 14, 2013

    A man with no memory is trapped in a mysterious hotel, controlled by an oppressive host who forces him to to catch a killer among the guests in exchange for the truth of his identity.

    Greg Derochie
    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 8:01 am

    Yes, you've summed up the challenges very well.

    Yes, you’ve summed up the challenges very well.

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