1. Posted: February 2, 2018In:

    In a near future dystopian society, when a young adult genetic experiment wakes up in the middle of world war 3 as part of a new kind of army, she has to find out how to end it all.

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    why is she going to be the hero? wich are here stakes? If she wakes up in the future maybe she has less to lose than a person of that time.Maybe she can discover that the leader of the "bad ones" in the story is somebody she knew in the past. Maybe they wake up he for a particular task, one she's thRead more

    why is she going to be the hero? wich are here stakes? If she wakes up in the future maybe she has less to lose than a person of that time.

    Maybe she can discover that the leader of the “bad ones” in the story is somebody she knew in the past. Maybe they wake up he for a particular task, one she’s the only who can solve it.

    I dont feel why she must, more than others,? find out how to end it all.

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  2. Posted: February 2, 2018In:

    In a futuristic crime-free world rendered paralyzed by digital addiction, an alcoholic policeman, repurposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum social media popularity, must unravel the mystery behind his daughter?s kidnapping

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    Im totally agree with dpg, that world could be interesting but the conflict needs to be something original. In Minority Report he has to discover why himself is going to kill somebody, thats a conflict unique in that world. Im also curious about the social media of the alcoholic policeman, does he hRead more

    Im totally agree with dpg, that world could be interesting but the conflict needs to be something original. In Minority Report he has to discover why himself is going to kill somebody, thats a conflict unique in that world.

    Im also curious about the social media of the alcoholic policeman, does he has de minimun social media popularity?

    As slappymctaco says i think it would be interesting to have people who cheat the system, maybe people who live out of the system, people who are rejected by society…the cheaters could also be the goverment…

    Think deeply in the world, find a unique conflict that can explain by itself a lot of that society.

    I sure there are good stories in that world! Godd luck!

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  3. Posted: February 1, 2018In:

    When a brutal warrior is blinded in a fight, he must go with the woman he tried to save to a magic river to get his eye sight healed before they?re both hunted by a cannibal tribe.

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    Hi! He has to heal his vision, but then? Is he going to confront the cannibal tribe? I think the blind issue is an obstacle not a goal, the goal could be to save the princess but what does he has to do to garantee her security?

    Hi!

    He has to heal his vision, but then? Is he going to confront the cannibal tribe? I think the blind issue is an obstacle not a goal, the goal could be to save the princess but what does he has to do to garantee her security?

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