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  1. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    Two farmers in Iceland are framed by the Sheriff and sent to Denmark to slave in chains for the rest of their life. The younger one returns after 20 years to realize he has a son and wants revenge.

    Gunns
    Added an answer on April 10, 2015 at 4:13 am

    The bulk of the story is the suffering and surviving of the main character and then the embarrassment and the conviction of the accuser doing wrong but thinking of doing right. It is also about his girlfriend getting accused by blood shame by having his child out of wedlock and not telling who is thRead more

    The bulk of the story is the suffering and surviving of the main character and then the embarrassment and the conviction of the accuser doing wrong but thinking of doing right. It is also about his girlfriend getting accused by blood shame by having his child out of wedlock and not telling who is the father. So when he is being punished for things he didn’t do he watches his sweetheart and mother of his child being executed. Then sent abroad for life. But doing well and surviving he gets the attention of an officer who takes pity on him and gets him a pardon. But he is filled with thoughts made in 20 years of revenge. The showdown is 20 pages and we’ll just have to see the movie to know what happens…. 🙂 But the logline – I just can’t get it under 30 words with out making it just like so many others….. But that’s me 🙂

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    Two farmers in Iceland are framed by the Sheriff and sent to Denmark to slave in chains for the rest of their life. The younger one returns after 20 years to realize he has a son and wants revenge.

    Gunns
    Added an answer on April 10, 2015 at 2:47 am

    Thanks dpg for your input. The historical time is the 16th century. If you were caught as a thieve in that period resulted in chains for life. The authorities did this to gain your land and stock. Your right about the short version - but it is then no different than 1000 of screenplays.

    Thanks dpg for your input. The historical time is the 16th century. If you were caught as a thieve in that period resulted in chains for life. The authorities did this to gain your land and stock.
    Your right about the short version – but it is then no different than 1000 of screenplays.

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    Two farmers in Iceland are framed by the Sheriff and sent to Denmark to slave in chains for the rest of their life. The younger one returns after 20 years to realize he has a son and wants revenge.

    Gunns
    Added an answer on April 10, 2015 at 1:02 am

    The accusation, the prison sentence and the consequence is the set-up - the revenge is the showdown.

    The accusation, the prison sentence and the consequence is the set-up – the revenge is the showdown.

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