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  1. Posted: December 15, 2020In: SciFi

    EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.

    Hallucigenia Penpusher
    Replied to answer on December 20, 2020 at 9:09 am

    Hi Mike. For some reason I can't reply to your comment further down, so I'm replying here. I would be glad to show you the synopsis, but I'm putting the script down for a bit. wrote the film script directly from my comic script and the more I read it, the more I see major problems with the structureRead more

    Hi Mike. For some reason I can’t reply to your comment further down, so I’m replying here.

    I would be glad to show you the synopsis, but I’m putting the script down for a bit. wrote the film script directly from my comic script and the more I read it, the more I see major problems with the structure, What worked (really well) in a comic that is spaced out from month to month does not work (extremely does not work) in a movie. Essentially I’ve got a kind of flashback telling the villains story. In the comic that sequence takes up an entire issue. It’s not just a flashback, it’s a story telling device it works really well. If this were cable series, it would be an entire episode and it work just fine. But in a movie? You can’t pull a fourth of the film to do that. I’ve got a solution, but I’m going to sit on it for a month or two as I’ve got other fish to fry and those fish have deadlines.
    Thanks!

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  2. Posted: December 15, 2020In: SciFi

    EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.

    Hallucigenia Penpusher
    Replied to answer on December 17, 2020 at 7:19 am

    In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a telepathic zealot to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and prevent the world falling into war. In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a telepathic zealot to thwart his plot to kill the Queen, thus preventing the world from falling into war. A vengefulRead more

    In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a telepathic zealot to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and prevent the world falling into war.

    In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a telepathic zealot to thwart his plot to kill the Queen, thus preventing the world from falling into war.

    A vengeful writer is killing unimaginative producers to stop people from ever being forced to generate another logline.

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  3. Posted: December 15, 2020In: SciFi

    EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.

    Hallucigenia Penpusher
    Replied to answer on December 16, 2020 at 5:26 pm

    I've got it to here: In Victorian London a vengeful spy battles a telepathic madman to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and vanquish the ghosts of her corrupted past.

    I’ve got it to here:

    In Victorian London a vengeful spy battles a telepathic madman to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and vanquish the ghosts of her corrupted past.

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