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EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.
In Victorian London a vengeful spy battles a telepathic madman to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and vanquish the ghosts of her corrupted past. I'm sticking to madman as a portion of the script concerns how he got that way. I don't feel that describing both the protagonists arc and the villains aRead more
In Victorian London a vengeful spy battles a telepathic madman to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and vanquish the ghosts of her corrupted past.
I’m sticking to madman as a portion of the script concerns how he got that way. I don’t feel that describing both the protagonists arc and the villains arc needs to happen IN the logline. If it prompts the listener to ask questions – great. It did it’s job. Is that wrong?
A spirited farm boy joins a rebellion to save a princess from a sinister imperial enforcer – and the galaxy from a planet-destroying weapon
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A team of intrepid explorers develop the first faster than light drive to take humanity to the stars. The only thing in their way is humanity itself.
Awesome. Thanks! This site is great. It's really difficult to see your story from the outside after you've had you head buried in it, Further tweaking: An extraordinary inventor and his intrepid team of adventurers struggle to perfect a faster-than-light spaceship to reach the stars, clashing with eRead more
Awesome. Thanks! This site is great. It’s really difficult to see your story from the outside after you’ve had you head buried in it, Further tweaking:
An extraordinary inventor and his intrepid team of adventurers struggle to perfect a faster-than-light spaceship to reach the stars, clashing with every greedy corporation and corrupt government in the solar system who will kill to possess the technology for themselves.
See lessA team of intrepid explorers develop the first faster than light drive to take humanity to the stars. The only thing in their way is humanity itself.
Yes, I'm rebuilding the logline based primarily on season one. What's the protocol here? Do I resubmit the logline as a new entry or stick it in here? In any case, the current version is below. I've crafted shorter, but this one seems pretty good (if a bit longer): Inventor Ernst Winter and his intrRead more
Yes, I’m rebuilding the logline based primarily on season one. What’s the protocol here? Do I resubmit the logline as a new entry or stick it in here? In any case, the current version is below. I’ve crafted shorter, but this one seems pretty good (if a bit longer):
Inventor Ernst Winter and his intrepid team of adventurers struggle to perfect a faster-than-light spaceship to reach the stars, but every greedy corporation and corrupt government in the solar system will kill to possess the technology for themselves.
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