1. Posted: January 14, 2020In:

    The son of a Nigerian Genocide warlord moves in with a Suburban American family to fulfill his fathers dying wish but the secrets of his old and new family threaten to send him back home to a life of psychological imprisonment.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    I like the first half of this but I'm lost when you add 'life of psychological imprisonment'. Why would his life be like that?

    I like the first half of this but I’m lost when you add ‘life of psychological imprisonment’. Why would his life be like that?

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  2. Posted: January 18, 2020In:

    After having a freak accident during a baseball game, high school students must use their superpowers to stop their enemies from invading their town.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    I think the freak accident thing is overplayed. Also, were there enemies before the freak accident or did they just randomly show up?

    I think the freak accident thing is overplayed. Also, were there enemies before the freak accident or did they just randomly show up?

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2020In:

    After his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    I like where this is going but I think there needs to be more.

    I like where this is going but I think there needs to be more.

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