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  1. Posted: July 4, 2013In: Public

    A mystically unnoticeable "Sea cliff" is the catalyst for the place of change. Story one is about an old lady, in all her alternative new age approach, change and moves on from grieving of her husband's death, before spreading his ashes into the ocean from the sea cliff. Story two is about an OCD, analytical & rigid couple, sick of their lifestyle, breaks their habits as for once they decide to go someplace chaotic(sea cliff), as they become intimate in there, later on, the once considered sterile couple are happy about becoming parents.

    Hillary Corby
    Added an answer on July 5, 2013 at 2:28 am

    Sorry, but was a bit confused.

    Sorry, but was a bit confused.

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  2. Posted: July 4, 2013

    A mafia wife assumes control and seeks revenge for her husband?s murder, and when she discovers her daughter is pregnant by the son of the charming, handsome killer, she pursues a different path that forces her to come to terms with her own blossoming feelings for him.

    Hillary Corby
    Added an answer on July 5, 2013 at 2:26 am

    Yes, that's why I wrote this book and now the script. Little is known about the female mafia bosses in Naples. They are even more vicious than the men. Hollywood always depicts the men, because they depict, as you rightly said, American mafia, who did come from the Italian mafia originally. I live iRead more

    Yes, that’s why I wrote this book and now the script. Little is known about the female mafia bosses in Naples. They are even more vicious than the men. Hollywood always depicts the men, because they depict, as you rightly said, American mafia, who did come from the Italian mafia originally. I live in Italy, have done so for 5 years and met many mafia and was surprised to learn of the females. A story to be told! In the South, the ‘Ndrangheta and the Cosa Nostra are also male dominated, but something changes in Naples. Oh well, thanks again for taking the time to give me some feedback. I changed the logline and now I am finishing the script.
    You are an angel.

    As we say in Italy, cordiali saluti!

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  3. Posted: July 4, 2013

    A mafia wife assumes control and seeks revenge for her husband?s murder, and when she discovers her daughter is pregnant by the son of the charming, handsome killer, she pursues a different path that forces her to come to terms with her own blossoming feelings for him.

    Hillary Corby
    Added an answer on July 4, 2013 at 3:30 pm

    Hi, thanks! great suggestion. Yes she takes control. That is the tradition with the Camorra mafia. When hubby dies or goes to prison, the wife takes over. Does assume control not say it well enough?

    Hi, thanks! great suggestion. Yes she takes control. That is the tradition with the Camorra mafia. When hubby dies or goes to prison, the wife takes over. Does assume control not say it well enough?

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