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An Australian researcher, transforms her life, after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires.
^^Ignore that, don't know what happened there....but something like this might work better... An Australian researcher transforms her (Mundane?) life after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London, and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires. (She will need to conviRead more
^^Ignore that, don’t know what happened there….but something like this might work better…
An Australian researcher transforms her (Mundane?) life after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London, and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires. (She will need to convince her overprotective family if she really is to live happily ever after.)
Rubbish examples, but you get what I mean.
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An Australian researcher transforms her life after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London, and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires.
An Australian researcher transforms her life after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London, and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires.
See lessAn Australian researcher, transforms her life, after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires.
This is a good logline, and one that doesn't need too much work. I would be interested in a little more detail in regards to WHY she needs to transform her life in the first place. What issues did she have that makes us commit to the transformation. Also does anything stand in her way in regards toRead more
This is a good logline, and one that doesn’t need too much work.
I would be interested in a little more detail in regards to WHY she needs to transform her life in the first place. What issues did she have that makes us commit to the transformation.
Also does anything stand in her way in regards to making the 5 year appointment? Obstacles.
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