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  1. Posted: May 28, 2012In: Public

    So his injured penis can heal an alpha-male is put on libido removing medication, disrupting his win at all costs mentality and threatening his chances of becoming street luge champion.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 12:46 am

    Sounds like an Adam Sandler movie :). The story is there though, so I suppose as a logline it works perfectly. Wether the story works is another matter indeed, impossible to say from just a logline. Not sure we need to mention the injured penis. My only concern would be that it could be concieved asRead more

    Sounds like an Adam Sandler movie :).

    The story is there though, so I suppose as a logline it works perfectly. Wether the story works is another matter indeed, impossible to say from just a logline. Not sure we need to mention the injured penis.

    My only concern would be that it could be concieved as two stories in one?

    How about…”When (Insert main characters name), an alpha male, loses his libido along with his win at all costs attitude, his chances of becomming street luge champion fade.”

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  2. Posted: May 28, 2012In: Public

    A drug addict and a businessman come together through their joint love of music, and become increasingly dependant on each other.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 12:40 am

    It's a slice of life drama, where the goals of Peter and Seth are probably slightly drowned out by the character studies. However, in regards to goals...They both crave the oppurtunity to chase their dreams, but do they have the capacity.

    It’s a slice of life drama, where the goals of Peter and Seth are probably slightly drowned out by the character studies. However, in regards to goals…They both crave the oppurtunity to chase their dreams, but do they have the capacity.

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  3. Posted: May 6, 2012In: Public

    How far would YOU go in pursuit of pirates and the perfect fish?

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 12:37 am

    Despite this not being an actual logline, just asking the question does immediately make me interested in the story. How far CAN somebody go? We all crave adventure in our lives, and this sounds like escapism at its best.

    Despite this not being an actual logline, just asking the question does immediately make me interested in the story. How far CAN somebody go? We all crave adventure in our lives, and this sounds like escapism at its best.

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