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A blood thirty time traveller frames a pretty vampire for murder. She has to prove his guilt or she and her clan will die.
I'm confused. If the time traveler is framing the vampire, then why does the vampire have to prove that the traveler is guilty? Please elaborate.
I’m confused. If the time traveler is framing the vampire, then why does the vampire have to prove that the traveler is guilty? Please elaborate.
See lessThis is Jess. She IS a waitress. She is having an existential crisis, and the customers are NOT helping.
Okay I actually laughed at this one. In a good Way!!! Sorry not in a bad way. I thought it was pretty funny. What I can suggest though, is that instead of just putting the name, write an adjective explaining her (as said above). This will help everybody involved to invest more thought into the charaRead more
Okay I actually laughed at this one. In a good Way!!! Sorry not in a bad way. I thought it was pretty funny. What I can suggest though, is that instead of just putting the name, write an adjective explaining her (as said above). This will help everybody involved to invest more thought into the character. Also describe your customers, albeit not one at a time. As a whole, would you say your customers are cranky? Big headed? Arrogant? Describe your customers as a whole in order for us to get a sense of what brought on Jess’s existential crisis, and how it affects her. Hope this helps!
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