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  1. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs, he is forced to re-evaluate his life and identity

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2013 at 10:58 am

    It would also be good if you gve an indication of the stakes as to why he had to review his life. Has he lost his memory and someone stolen his dientity? As a CEO he could keep his job or does he risk losing it. After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs, he must change his attitudeRead more

    It would also be good if you gve an indication of the stakes as to why he had to review his life. Has he lost his memory and someone stolen his dientity? As a CEO he could keep his job or does he risk losing it. After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs, he must change his attitude -;if he wants people to help him adjust to his new life. Ie Does he risk losing his wife. After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs, he must change his attitude or his wife will leave him. After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs he has lost his identity and he tries to recall past events in an attempt to become who he was once more. -Not very good loglines but they give more of a story.

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  2. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy struggles to attain peace as he unwittingly rekindles an age long war.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2013 at 10:21 am

    I think you need t clarify what type of peace he is after, inner peace, peace for the war. Also is the war between people of today or his ancestors or a mixture ie who are at war

    I think you need t clarify what type of peace he is after, inner peace, peace for the war. Also is the war between people of today or his ancestors or a mixture ie who are at war

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  3. Posted: July 21, 2012In: Public

    A dark comedy about racism set during the Cronulla riots.

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    Added an answer on July 22, 2012 at 3:49 pm

    You need to imply who is the protagonist, their goal, who is the antagonist and what the story is about. Eg As racial tensions in Cronulla develop into a fight, Joe tries to organise his troops, stay alive and not to beat up his fiance's brother who is the leader of the opposing gang. No exactly a gRead more

    You need to imply who is the protagonist, their goal, who is the antagonist and what the story is about. Eg As racial tensions in Cronulla develop into a fight, Joe tries to organise his troops, stay alive and not to beat up his fiance’s brother who is the leader of the opposing gang. No exactly a great logline or anything that relates to your story but an example of how one could incorporate the elements and indicate what type of film it is.

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