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When a 21-year-old delves into the world of mathematics, he uncovers a profound cosmic connection that resonates throughout the universe. However, his life takes an unexpected turn when he encounters an actress chosen by a wealthy entrepreneur to replace his own missing daughter, who happens to be the young man’s lost love.
Dude with a problem example: Enlightened by the theory of cosmic connections, a recluse mathematician sets in motion a collision course with a wealthy entrepreneur seeking to replace his missing daughter with an actress - the theorist's former lost love.
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See lessEnlightened by the theory of cosmic connections, a recluse mathematician sets in motion a collision course with a wealthy entrepreneur seeking to replace his missing daughter with an actress – the theorist’s former lost love.
When traumatic memories of a past life as a WWII pilot haunt him, an emotionally fractured young man must harness his wild imagination; but when he breaks from his domineering father, he must master self doubt in order to become a whole and grounded person before losing his life to suicide
The protag’s past life is your hook, and I get it’s the catalyst for change, but have you considered exploring your hook via his grandfather? Riff: Grandad (co-pilot) was the lone survivor of the WWII plane crash that killed his best friend (now reincarnated as protag). This is your story. Just offeRead more
The protag’s past life is your hook, and I get it’s the catalyst for change, but have you considered exploring your hook via his grandfather?
Riff: Grandad (co-pilot) was the lone survivor of the WWII plane crash that killed his best friend (now reincarnated as protag).
This is your story. Just offering ways to crank the hook up to eleven 😉
See lessAn Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.
My two cents: Indigenous implies a particular place - but the location is missing. The initial logline reads more like a teaser. The second iteration is better. Non-historical character names can be omitted. Example: When a group of trophy hunters goes missing on an African safari, a police officerRead more
My two cents:
Indigenous implies a particular place – but the location is missing.
The initial logline reads more like a teaser. The second iteration is better.
Non-historical character names can be omitted.
Example:
When a group of trophy hunters goes missing on an African safari, a police officer must use his indigenous skills to rescue them before the hunters become the hunted.
Make this yours. I hope this helps.
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