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When the Hungarian ballroom world champion comes to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, he quickly discovers the corruption and betrayal that stand between him and the fast-fading American Dream.
Very cool, but what does the protag do with the “discovery?” Example: Immigrating to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, a famous Hungarian ballroom instructor must overcome the corruption and betrayal between him and the fast-fading American Dream. Keep going!
Very cool, but what does the protag do with the “discovery?”
Example:
Immigrating to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, a famous Hungarian ballroom instructor must overcome the corruption and betrayal between him and the fast-fading American Dream.
Keep going!
See lessWhen he is denied admission to any of the college for his low grades, he gets an invitation from a mysterious college which was shut down decades ago.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal? You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].” Make this yours. Take care.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal?
You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].”
Make this yours. Take care.
See lessThe global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.
Good point. Maybe a good case for “five exorcists form an unlikely fellowship.”
Good point. Maybe a good case for “five exorcists form an unlikely fellowship.”
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