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  1. Posted: December 3, 2020In: SciFi

    After an alien virus infects a remote mining colony, a Doctor faces a race against time to find a cure before a returning ship carries it to Earth.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 3, 2020 at 5:18 am

    Dig it! Added location, a clock to your timebomb, and plot device “auto-return” to your ship. Leaning towards: “When a virus infects the colony of a remote mining planet, a doctor has three days to find the cure before the ship auto-returns to Earth” Take care.

    Dig it!
    Added location, a clock to your timebomb, and plot device “auto-return” to your ship.
    Leaning towards:
    “When a virus infects the colony of a remote mining planet, a doctor has three days to find the cure before the ship auto-returns to Earth”

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: November 27, 2020In: Family

    A Christmas-loving elf leads a rebellion to bring back the true meaning of Christmas after he gets his dream job at the North Pole only to discover it’s a slave labour camp ran by a maniacal dictator: Santa Claus!

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on November 29, 2020 at 7:24 am

    I get it, check out this family flix list; will help gauge how sharp a stick you want to poke at Santa 😉 1. Robots (2005) - Dream job hopes are dashed. 2. How the Grinch Stole Christmas (2000) - Xmas = $, Santa is referred to as “Fat boy”. 3. Klaus (2019) – Santa can fix anything but himself. 4. ArtRead more

    I get it, check out this family flix list; will help gauge how sharp a stick you want to poke at Santa 😉
    1. Robots (2005) – Dream job hopes are dashed.
    2. How the Grinch Stole Christmas (2000) – Xmas = $, Santa is referred to as “Fat boy”.
    3. Klaus (2019) – Santa can fix anything but himself.
    4. Arthur Christmas (2011) – Mashup of all mentioned.
    Last but not least, my fav Christmas movie – I Spit on Your Grave (1978) lol.
    Take care.

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  3. Posted: November 27, 2020In: Family

    A Christmas-loving elf leads a rebellion to bring back the true meaning of Christmas after he gets his dream job at the North Pole only to discover it’s a slave labour camp ran by a maniacal dictator: Santa Claus!

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 28, 2020 at 9:16 am

    I can’t do it, Mike. I can’t throw Santa under the bus this close to Christmas! How about: “An overworked elf -?- lead a rebellion -?- remind Santa of the true meaning of Christmas” You need a baddie, e.g. some power-hungry elf that wants the big guy’s spot. Give him a relevant name e.g. “self-elf”Read more

    I can’t do it, Mike. I can’t throw Santa under the bus this close to Christmas!
    How about:
    “An overworked elf -?- lead a rebellion -?- remind Santa of the true meaning of Christmas”
    You need a baddie, e.g. some power-hungry elf that wants the big guy’s spot. Give him a relevant name e.g. “self-elf” for fun and someone that our overworked elf must conquer to bring Sanat to his senses and right Christmas Town.
    BTW: I like the idea of your ANT elf considering your PROTAG elf a “zealot”, but in the end, he rediscovers elf brotherhood and gets a name change to boot.
    Hopes this gets you closer, take care brother.

    BTW: Watched “The Christmas Chronicles 2” last night – my review may be a little biased, but a good example of “give me the same – but different”.

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