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  1. Posted: November 25, 2020In: Action

    A civilian operative writes an AI app that guarantees facial recognition. The app also turns the phone in your pocket into a targeting sensor. Is he willing to kill to protect us all from social media?

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on November 28, 2020 at 8:09 am

    I think I know where you're going with this, GPS can get you to the location e.g. mall, but can't pinpoint a person in the crowd; you'll find me at the food court ;) What if the app can exploit military-grade satellites to pinpoint? What we're discussing is the Method part of the logline which is thRead more

    I think I know where you’re going with this, GPS can get you to the location e.g. mall, but can’t pinpoint a person in the crowd; you’ll find me at the food court 😉
    What if the app can exploit military-grade satellites to pinpoint? What we’re discussing is the Method part of the logline which is the least and last – meaning, you have bigger fish to fry bud.
    Let’s break yours down:
    PROTAG: Civilian Operative.
    GOAL? Q: WHY was the app created? Can it be downloaded from Social Media? Does the Operative want to kill his Frankenstein creation? Can he patch his app to kill the exploit?
    ANT/OBSTACLE? What’s in the way of this operative completing his goal? FYI: If his app is on Social Media – baddies already have hands-on.
    STAKES: Nefarious groups make use of the operative’s app for assassinations including his own.
    METHOD: App exploits military-grade satellites to pinpoint assassinations.
    TIP: Add “Enemy of the State” to your research (concept).
    Let me know.

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2020In: Action

    A civilian operative writes an AI app that guarantees facial recognition. The app also turns the phone in your pocket into a targeting sensor. Is he willing to kill to protect us all from social media?

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 26, 2020 at 1:45 am

    The app is interesting, but the AI connection is missing. If I were away, I'm sure a professional assassin could hack my family's "Find My Phone". Now, if a baddie could use this app to explode my phone – it'd be a lot cooler ;) Take care.

    The app is interesting, but the AI connection is missing.
    If I were away, I’m sure a professional assassin could hack my family’s “Find My Phone”. Now, if a baddie could use this app to explode my phone – it’d be a lot cooler 😉

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: November 22, 2020In: Comedy

    To relive his childhood, a mentally ill writer decided to bring his 1950s sitcom to life by pitching it his script to executives.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 24, 2020 at 7:37 am

    Many famous writers suffer from manic depression. What if you wrote your logline from the perspective of a recently diagnosed writer who is hell-bent on getting his 1950s sitcom greenlit to relive his childhood? Hope this helps.

    Many famous writers suffer from manic depression. What if you wrote your logline from the perspective of a recently diagnosed writer who is hell-bent on getting his 1950s sitcom greenlit to relive his childhood?

    Hope this helps.

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