1. Posted: February 26, 2022In:

    On the beautiful British waterways an inexperienced narrow-boater is pursued by a malevolent, murderous barge as she reluctantly cruises upriver alone to sell her Grandpa’s boat.

    Odie Samurai

    Leaning towards: “A novice captainess must escape a malevolent barge when traversing the British waterways in order to sell her grandfather’s narrowboat” Hope this helps, keep going!

    Leaning towards:
    “A novice captainess must escape a malevolent barge when traversing the British waterways in order to sell her grandfather’s narrowboat”

    Hope this helps, keep going!

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  2. Posted: February 25, 2022In:

    An ex-gambler wrestling with addiction, is forced to win back her daughter by playing her abusive mother in law in a winner take all game of poker.

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    Odie Samurai

    Consider the following: “An ex-gambler and her estranged poker champion mother-in-law compete for sole custody of her daughter” The addiction and abuse references — B story plot points. Keep going, would love to watch.

    Consider the following:
    “An ex-gambler and her estranged poker champion mother-in-law compete for sole custody of her daughter”

    The addiction and abuse references — B story plot points.
    Keep going, would love to watch.

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2022In:

    A soon to be father must save the family he never wanted after his nephew is hospitalized by a gang destroying his family.

    Odie Samurai

    This is what I’m able to glean: A deadbeat dad must save his family from a ruthless gang. Add your plot points to make this unique. Take care.

    This is what I’m able to glean:
    A deadbeat dad must save his family from a ruthless gang.

    Add your plot points to make this unique.
    Take care.

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