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  1. Posted: February 14, 2022In: Drama

    When a climate activist with low self-esteem learns the new mayor will turn their experimental eco-metropolis into a foreign trade capital, she mobilizes a citizen eco-force to protect this Shangri-La. She fails, but ends up birthing a global sustainability revolution in which she’s the new leader.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on February 25, 2022 at 9:32 am

    Leaning towards: “A meek climate activist sets out to save her beloved eco-metropolis when the newly appointed mayor trades the city natural resources for economic growth” I understand there’s an ecological downside to foreign trade, but I didn’t immediately equate the baddie mayor’s intent as the dRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “A meek climate activist sets out to save her beloved eco-metropolis when the newly appointed mayor trades the city natural resources for economic growth”

    I understand there’s an ecological downside to foreign trade, but I didn’t immediately equate the baddie mayor’s intent as the destruction of their environment. Thus, I broke it down to its common denominator for readability purposes.

    With her meek start, I kept the mobilized eco-force out as I considered it a “B” story plot.
    Hope this helps, make this yours, keep going!

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  2. Posted: February 8, 2022In: Thriller

    When she visits her future in-laws’ ranch in southern Texas, a headstrong city girl tries to save two illegal immigrant children when she discovers the ranch manager is using illegal immigrants for fertilizer.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on February 16, 2022 at 1:33 am

    A little cleanup for redundancy and marketability: “When visiting future in-laws on a south Texas ranch, a headstrong woman must rescue two undocumented noncitizen children when she discovers the rancher is using migrant workers as fertilizer” This logline is getting better, keep going!

    A little cleanup for redundancy and marketability:
    “When visiting future in-laws on a south Texas ranch, a headstrong woman must rescue two undocumented noncitizen children when she discovers the rancher is using migrant workers as fertilizer”

    This logline is getting better, keep going!

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  3. Posted: February 7, 2022In: Horror

    In a non-too-distance dystopian future, an emotionally distant augmentation surgeon sets out to search for his missing family as cyber-zombies overrun the city

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on February 8, 2022 at 3:31 am

    Leaning towards: In a bleak cyberpunk future, a workaholic implant surgeon sets out to rescue his family when cyber-zombies overrun the neon city. Would love to watch it!

    Leaning towards:
    In a bleak cyberpunk future, a workaholic implant surgeon sets out to rescue his family when cyber-zombies overrun the neon city.

    Would love to watch it!

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