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A dog makes his way back home to his owner after they’re separated in a bombing during the Korean War.
Good stuff Richiev. I had this flash of an apple head chihuahua the person/soldier kept in his shirt before getting separated 😉
Good stuff Richiev. I had this flash of an apple head chihuahua the person/soldier kept in his shirt before getting separated 😉
See lessA dog makes his way back home to his owner after they’re separated in a bombing during the Korean War.
Dig it! A Homeward Bound premise set in the Korean War. To pull me in as a reader: Any special characteristics concerning the dog? Anything unique to the landscape of the Korean War that the dog must cross to up the stakes? Take care.
Dig it! A Homeward Bound premise set in the Korean War.
To pull me in as a reader:
Any special characteristics concerning the dog?
Anything unique to the landscape of the Korean War that the dog must cross to up the stakes?
Take care.
See lessAs police uncover a far-right group behind a series of grisly murders sweeping Japan, a police officer and former ultra nationalist seeking redemption must go undercover to prevent his younger brother from going down the same wrong path.
There’s something to this, consider the following: To keep from following two goals (police – group behind bars | far-right guy – rescue mission), two unconnected protags but one brother, I produced this. Example: “A former ultra-nationalist must rejoin a far-right group behind a series of grisly muRead more
There’s something to this, consider the following:
To keep from following two goals (police – group behind bars | far-right guy – rescue mission), two unconnected protags but one brother, I produced this.
Example:
“A former ultra-nationalist must rejoin a far-right group behind a series of grisly murders sweeping Japan in order to rescue his wayward younger brother”
You can up the stakes by adding a “before” element at the end e.g., before the police catch up to him.
Hope you find this constructive, make this yours, keep going!
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