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  1. Posted: January 27, 2022In: Thriller

    A broken man learns of the time a famous thief will break into his home and auctions off the experience of a legal killing, secretly hoping it will be him waiting inside the right open window.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 28, 2022 at 1:10 am

    Interesting premise, leaning towards: “A dejected man turns to the dark web in order to auction the chance to help kill a thief when uncovering his home is being invaded” Took some liberties with auction plausibility via the dark web – you get the idea. Make this yours, keep going!

    Interesting premise, leaning towards:
    “A dejected man turns to the dark web in order to auction the chance to help kill a thief when uncovering his home is being invaded”

    Took some liberties with auction plausibility via the dark web – you get the idea.

    Make this yours, keep going!

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  2. Posted: January 19, 2022In: Drama

    When a middle-aged lady decides to become one of the ladies of the night to overcome hardships, she must do all she can to survive the additional struggles to reach an objective.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 19, 2022 at 9:13 am

    This is what I can glean: “A destitute woman must [show don’t tell GOAL] when caught in a vicious cycle of selling sex to survive” As a reader, I’m left asking: Who is she, what kind of prostitution is she involved in, what is her goal, and who is keeping her from accomplishing it? Hope you find thiRead more

    This is what I can glean:
    “A destitute woman must [show don’t tell GOAL] when caught in a vicious cycle of selling sex to survive”

    As a reader, I’m left asking: Who is she, what kind of prostitution is she involved in, what is her goal, and who is keeping her from accomplishing it?

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  3. Posted: January 15, 2022In: Drama

    A mousey, risk adverse,Japanese/American single mom, takes on the Tokyo mafia to rescue her long lost brother and restore her family’s art fortune.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on January 19, 2022 at 7:26 am

    *Hail Mary

    *Hail Mary

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