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A princess who kills an important general to rescue another girl must hope her former enemies will accept her after her escape, now wanted dead or alive.
Consider the following: A princess in what land? A worldbuilder can help the reader envision your premise. Can “an important general” be the captain of the guards or royal castle guards – you get the idea. Who is this girl? E.g., a wrongfully accused servant. What is their quest that lands them in aRead more
Consider the following:
A princess in what land? A worldbuilder can help the reader envision your premise.
Can “an important general” be the captain of the guards or royal castle guards – you get the idea.
Who is this girl? E.g., a wrongfully accused servant.
What is their quest that lands them in a rival kingdom?
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessWhen a hardnose PR exec is hired by a company to pitch the takeover of her financially-strapped former hometown – nicknamed for its law to not openly celebrate Christmas – she must grapple with her painful past, a city manager who wants to save the town’s independence, and whether she still believes in the spirit of the season.
Sorry, this took so long. Since you have a high concept title “Saving Scroogetown,” how about: “A hard-nosed PR exec must overcome her painful past in order to land a new mega-factory deal in her misery hometown” PG-13 version. OR “A hard-nosed PR exec must win the hearts of her miserly hometown inRead more
Sorry, this took so long.
Since you have a high concept title “Saving Scroogetown,” how about:
“A hard-nosed PR exec must overcome her painful past in order to land a new mega-factory deal in her misery hometown” PG-13 version.
OR
“A hard-nosed PR exec must win the hearts of her miserly hometown in order to land a new mega-factory deal” G/PG Version.
You get the idea, make this yours – take care.
See lessAfter her estranged father’s death, a free-spirited activist must return to her political roots and take her place in her family’s business of corporate law.
From your synopsis, I can see the story world of Century needs your protags voice, but I’m not seeing this reflected in the logline. Find words that describe the arc of the corporation and community that align with her goal or heighten her dilemma.
From your synopsis, I can see the story world of Century needs your protags voice, but I’m not seeing this reflected in the logline. Find words that describe the arc of the corporation and community that align with her goal or heighten her dilemma.
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