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  1. Posted: January 3, 2022In: Drama

    After signing a deal with the devil, A young egotistical successful musician must get out of his leech music executive’s contract in order to be with the love of his life, and gain back his freedom.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 5, 2022 at 10:21 am

    Leaning towards: “An egocentric musician must escape an enigmatic music execs contract when signing his soul to the Devil” I left the B story (love) out, make this yours, keep going! BTW: check out the 1984 classic “Oh, God! You Devil” for research.

    Leaning towards:
    “An egocentric musician must escape an enigmatic music execs contract when signing his soul to the Devil”

    I left the B story (love) out, make this yours, keep going!
    BTW: check out the 1984 classic “Oh, God! You Devil” for research.

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2021In: SciFi

    When her mother disappears in a supernatural event, an estranged daughter communes with a world beyond ours to reconcile with her, but discovers that the traumas of her past are insignificant when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 31, 2021 at 1:33 am

    Consider the following: What relatable supernatural event took the mother? When enlightened by the mother, is there a spiritual or physical goal/dilemma that changes her trajectory in the circle of life? Show don’t tell this “when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.” Hope this helps, keep goiRead more

    Consider the following:
    What relatable supernatural event took the mother?
    When enlightened by the mother, is there a spiritual or physical goal/dilemma that changes her trajectory in the circle of life?
    Show don’t tell this “when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.”

    Hope this helps, keep going!

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  3. Posted: December 19, 2021In: Action

    After the death of his employer, a devoted bodyguard is far from knowing he has inherited all plus the old demons of his employer of which he has to fight to save his life and that of the daughter of the deceased with whom he has a secret affair

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on December 27, 2021 at 1:28 pm

    Capitalized on his skills, gave the employer an identity, injected some intrigue for the daughter. Leaning towards: “A devoted bodyguard must fight to protect the daughter of a murdered CEO when inheriting his dead employer’s nefarious debts” Hope this helps, take care.

    Capitalized on his skills, gave the employer an identity, injected some intrigue for the daughter.
    Leaning towards:
    “A devoted bodyguard must fight to protect the daughter of a murdered CEO when inheriting his dead employer’s nefarious debts”

    Hope this helps, take care.

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