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  1. Posted: January 27, 2022In: Thriller

    Armed with a fresh, distinctive way of looking at life, a young man finds himself helping an unconventional theatre group find their way into Hollywood in a uniquely criminal way, while hiding the fact that his time is running out.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on February 1, 2022 at 7:52 am

    Cool, you can also do a play on the consequences. Example: “A publicity-seeking actor films him and his struggling acting crew robbing a bank while in character, but they quickly learn an overzealous teller won’t go down without a fight”

    Cool, you can also do a play on the consequences.
    Example: “A publicity-seeking actor films him and his struggling acting crew robbing a bank while in character, but they quickly learn an overzealous teller won’t go down without a fight”

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  2. Posted: January 27, 2022In: Thriller

    Believing that creatively explosive social interactions will cure his anxiety disorder, a man hurtles toward a brighter future in an extremely unsociable way.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on February 1, 2022 at 7:13 am

    Consider the following based on your synopsis: The suicide attempt due to his debilitating anxiety disorder is your protag’s major event aka call to action. Since I struggled to envision “explosive social interactions” I am leaning toward him becoming an anarchist or adopting anarchist behavior on hRead more

    Consider the following based on your synopsis:
    The suicide attempt due to his debilitating anxiety disorder is your protag’s major event aka call to action.
    Since I struggled to envision “explosive social interactions” I am leaning toward him becoming an anarchist or adopting anarchist behavior on his journey to the cure.
    You need opposition to him achieving his goal e.g.
    A story: He must atone for his anarchist ways.
    B Story: He must overcome a run-in with a hitman.

    Many of your plot points can easily change his major event depending on where your story begins. Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2022In: Thriller

    A broken man learns of the time a famous thief will break into his home and auctions off the experience of a legal killing, secretly hoping it will be him waiting inside the right open window.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on February 1, 2022 at 2:25 am

    I haven't heard of this site, thanks for the tip.

    I haven’t heard of this site, thanks for the tip.

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