Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
after escaping from the hands of a brutal casino own in las vegas, the unidentical and frustrated twin brothers, one white and one black come home to new york to bury their late father and start a new life but little did they know that new york has nothing better to offer them.
1. “After escaping from the hands of a brutal casino own in Las Vegas” What were the circumstances of their escape and is this owner still after them? 2. “the unidentical and frustrated twin brothers, one white and one black” = biracial twin brothers? 3. “come home to New York to bury their late fatRead more
1. “After escaping from the hands of a brutal casino own in Las Vegas” What were the circumstances of their escape and is this owner still after them?
2. “the unidentical and frustrated twin brothers, one white and one black” = biracial twin brothers?
3. “come home to New York to bury their late father and start a new life” Which is the major event/catalyst? Fleeing Las Vegas or burring their father which takes the twins out of the norm and sets their story in motion?
4. “but little did they know that New York has nothing better to offer them” Being this is a Comedy here’s your opportunity for the punch line.
Keep going, take care.
See lessEMPIRE
Dig it! -Who is Adam Meyer e.g., warrior, simple farmer, office worker? -Who teaches the ancient ways e.g., master, sensei, monk? Leaning towards: “In a dystopian golden city ruled by a tyrannical emperor, a * must master the ancient ways from * to exact revenge for the execution of his insurgent wiRead more
Dig it!
-Who is Adam Meyer e.g., warrior, simple farmer, office worker?
-Who teaches the ancient ways e.g., master, sensei, monk?
Leaning towards:
“In a dystopian golden city ruled by a tyrannical emperor, a * must master the ancient ways from * to exact revenge for the execution of his insurgent wife”
BTW: For your next logline post add the logline at the top and your title at the bottom. Also, the Formula link at the top has all kinds of tips to help you construct a logline.
Take care.
See lessAn obsessive, but genius inventor, struggles against government, corporate, and personal obstacles after he builds the first faster-than-light spaceship and attempts to break humanity out of a cycle of increasingly devastating wars.
To clarify #5, your goal is to “break humanity out of a cycle of increasingly devastating wars” but wherever humans go – we bring war. I was genuinely curious about your take on how this goal can be achieved. Good day.
To clarify #5, your goal is to “break humanity out of a cycle of increasingly devastating wars” but wherever humans go – we bring war. I was genuinely curious about your take on how this goal can be achieved.
See lessGood day.