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A group of high school students gains superpowers after having a freak accident get revenge on their bullies.
Cool, try changing "freak accident" to your version of how these high schoolers attained superpowers. Example: "After escaping an alien abduction beam, a group of high schoolers seeks revenge on their bully tormentors using their newfound superpowers" Happy New Year!
Cool, try changing “freak accident” to your version of how these high schoolers attained superpowers.
Example:
“After escaping an alien abduction beam, a group of high schoolers seeks revenge on their bully tormentors using their newfound superpowers”
Happy New Year!
See lessKnocked out and put in cryosleep for 30 years, a space soldier wakes up only to find his wife murdered and his child gone. His search for vengeance and motives will be tested upon finding out that it was his son the one responsible for the crime.
Dig it! leaning towards: "When awakened from a 30-year cryosleep, a space solder sets out to exact vengeance against the ruthless murderer of his wife – his son." Happy New Year!
Dig it! leaning towards:
“When awakened from a 30-year cryosleep, a space solder sets out to exact vengeance against the ruthless murderer of his wife – his son.”
Happy New Year!
See lessAn obsessive, but genius inventor, struggles against government, corporate, and personal obstacles after he builds the first faster-than-light spaceship and attempts to break humanity out of a cycle of increasingly devastating wars.
A truly relevant premise in our time, here are my suggestions: 1. Can protag “inventor” change to an e.g., SpaceX aerospace engineer? As I write, NASA aerospace engineer Harold G. White works to develop faster-than-light travel aka a Warp Drive. 2. Change faster-than-light to warp drive to tractor bRead more
A truly relevant premise in our time, here are my suggestions:
1. Can protag “inventor” change to an e.g., SpaceX aerospace engineer? As I write, NASA aerospace engineer Harold G. White works to develop faster-than-light travel aka a Warp Drive.
2. Change faster-than-light to warp drive to tractor beam more, Sci-fi nerds, to your premise 😉
3. Obstacles are required, but using the word is vague, you need an e.g., baddie nation out to get this tech OR something personally insurmountable – as your obstacle.
4. The word “attempts” turns your premise into a wet noodle. “Try not. Do or do not. There is no try – Yoda”
5. Finally, as a human collective, wherever we go “Mars” there will be war. Ask yourself, how would YOU attempt to change or prevent to achieve this utopia, then distill that down as a compelling goal.
Hallucigenia, these are only suggestions – this is your story.
Happy New Year!
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