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  1. Posted: June 13, 2013In: Public

    The attempted assassination of a bright young politician sends his devoted wife down a reckless path toward the one man who can save him ? but whose unethical treatment leaves the patient with a murderous appetite.

    Jack Norton
    Added an answer on June 13, 2013 at 5:06 am

    This version of the logline reflects the further development of the main characters, and IMO) is different enough from the original to warrant reposting. If it's not, I apologize in advance. As always, your feedback is much appreciated.

    This version of the logline reflects the further development of the main characters, and IMO) is different enough from the original to warrant reposting. If it’s not, I apologize in advance. As always, your feedback is much appreciated.

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Desperate to cure her husband's terminal illness, a young socialite turns to an enigmatic scientist whose treatment works – but leaves the patient with a murderous appetite.

    Jack Norton
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:39 am

    I was originally much more specific, to where it was "on the nose." "Murderous appetite" is a euphamism for what his actual cravings become. I also tried more general - using "sinister personality changes," but it didn't feel specific enough. I'd love to hear from more folks, though, whether they feRead more

    I was originally much more specific, to where it was “on the nose.” “Murderous appetite” is a euphamism for what his actual cravings become. I also tried more general – using “sinister personality changes,” but it didn’t feel specific enough. I’d love to hear from more folks, though, whether they feel general is better.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Desperate to cure her husband's terminal illness, a young socialite turns to an enigmatic scientist whose treatment works – but leaves the patient with a murderous appetite.

    Jack Norton
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:35 am

    I thought about having the woman dealing with her own disease, or the husband dealing with his. I like the way it is now for a couple of reasons: I like the notion of taking two people who are in love and turning them against each other (they have it all, and so will suffer terribly); I like the ideRead more

    I thought about having the woman dealing with her own disease, or the husband dealing with his. I like the way it is now for a couple of reasons: I like the notion of taking two people who are in love and turning them against each other (they have it all, and so will suffer terribly); I like the idea of the young socialite discovering something money can’t buy; and it works well with the “Be careful what you wish for” theme.

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