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  1. Posted: September 24, 2017In: Comedy

    When a meltdown started accidentally by a butter sandwich opens a time vortex in a lonely computer geek?s house, he and two previous inhabitants thrown in the present by the vortex, must save the planet from an alien warrior race who thinks humans are unfit to handle time travel.

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    Added an answer on September 24, 2017 at 2:13 pm

    I agree with the above. While I like the Butter Sandwich to indicate it is a comedy it does take precious words away from the main concept.? Using "lonely" with Computer nerd seems redundant and therefore it's a wasted word and extra thought for someone wanting to get the concept right away and be wRead more

    I agree with the above. While I like the Butter Sandwich to indicate it is a comedy it does take precious words away from the main concept.? Using “lonely” with Computer nerd seems redundant and therefore it’s a wasted word and extra thought for someone wanting to get the concept right away and be wowed by it.? Just one sentence of what the computer nerd must do to save earth – like NIr says above “Kill the Alien general or what ?? Perhaps invent a machine out of his toaster that will send the Alien back to his planet and close the wormhole.

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2017In: Comedy

    Comedy: BLUE BALL BIOSPHERE The 4 YEAR BIOSPHERE EXPERIMENT goes haywire when the 4 WOMEN turn out to be Lesbians and the 4 MEN do all they can to break out!

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    Added an answer on September 24, 2017 at 2:07 pm

    Yes, it's more of a sketch.? Hahaha? -- really needs work now that I see it up here.? That's the great thing about this and Karel Segers having this opportunity.? Thanks Karel.? And Leon and Nir.

    Yes, it’s more of a sketch.? Hahaha? — really needs work now that I see it up here.? That’s the great thing about this and Karel Segers having this opportunity.? Thanks Karel.? And Leon and Nir.

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2017In: Romance

    Rom-Com: THE DAY THE MUSIC STOPPED AN AGING ROCK GROUPIE can?t find a Band so she takes it out on every MAN she dates, until she dates a PSYCHIATRIST.

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    Added an answer on September 24, 2017 at 1:52 pm

    Nir, that is a very good goal. I am totally searching for comedic situations (knowing very well that drama is needed for comedy) and her forming her own band seems ripe for comedy.? Thanks. And dpg - thanks for more insight and provoking thought to expand and also be specific in this character's goaRead more

    Nir, that is a very good goal. I am totally searching for comedic situations (knowing very well that drama is needed for comedy) and her forming her own band seems ripe for comedy.? Thanks.

    And dpg – thanks for more insight and provoking thought to expand and also be specific in this character’s goal.

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