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  1. Posted: September 20, 2017In: Romance

    Rom-Com: THE DAY THE MUSIC STOPPED AN AGING ROCK GROUPIE can?t find a Band so she takes it out on every MAN she dates, until she dates a PSYCHIATRIST.

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    Added an answer on September 23, 2017 at 7:13 am

    Thank you -- great stuff to work with.? I appreciate it.? The inciting incident would be her getting kicked out from the Last Band that would have her.? Yes, not a likable character exactly.? James

    Thank you — great stuff to work with.? I appreciate it.? The inciting incident would be her getting kicked out from the Last Band that would have her.? Yes, not a likable character exactly.? James

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  2. Posted: September 14, 2017In: Adventure

    In order to save his mother, a young man embarks in an adventure to get proof of a friendly monster’s existence.

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2017 at 9:09 am

    To save his sick Mother, a Young Boy? must get proof of the?existence of a ?being not known to science, so he travels far and wide and brings back a friendly Monster to everyone's surprise. Not great but you get the idea to simplify it.?? I hope.

    To save his sick Mother, a Young Boy? must get proof of the?existence of a ?being not known to science, so he travels far and wide and brings back a friendly Monster to everyone’s surprise.

    Not great but you get the idea to simplify it.?? I hope.

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  3. Posted: September 14, 2017In: Comedy

    A dracula who hates killing people for blood finds a companionship in a coward son of a gangster.

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2017 at 9:02 am

    I do love the idea of this odd mix of genre characters. I echo most by saying to have an inciting incident and reason for them to need each other or meet each other at least.? The one I read in these comments is way to long and complex - tighten it and lighten it up I would suggest.? Like a 10 yearRead more

    I do love the idea of this odd mix of genre characters. I echo most by saying to have an inciting incident and reason for them to need each other or meet each other at least.? The one I read in these comments is way to long and complex – tighten it and lighten it up I would suggest.? Like a 10 year would understand.? Keep at it on this one.

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