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After failing his final mission to receive his wings and graduate to guardianship, an angel must work with his client – a depressed mime ? to help him discover reasons to continue living and to fulfill his own quest of becoming a guardian angel.
Sounds intriguing When i read it the first time i was a bit confused about who was what and who's the MC. Maybe something you can be more specific about. Why does the MC have to work with his client? If you give the MC a reason to do it now it will be more interesting. I understand the reason is becRead more
Sounds intriguing
When i read it the first time i was a bit confused about who was what and who’s the MC. Maybe something you can be more specific about.
Why does the MC have to work with his client?
If you give the MC a reason to do it now it will be more interesting.
I understand the reason is because the MC didn’t become a guardian angel but why is it so important to him to become a guardian angel now?
I also think you need some negative stakes. What will happen if your MC does not succeed?
Now it sounds like this could go on forever and if the MC does not succeed it’s not that big of a deal?
What happens if the MC doesn’t become a guardian angel? will he die after a certain age? Will he become just regular?
These two things go together so i think you can try to put a ticking clock and a negative stake in log line.
Good luck 🙂
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