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Based on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer?s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”
I do like the concept of this and feel it could work well as a film...would suggest your 'officer'/husband/father is the MC - you can still detail the experience of the wife/children on the train and in the camp - running alongside his actions (whilst he's doing this..they are experiencing that..),Read more
I do like the concept of this and feel it could work well as a film…would suggest your ‘officer’/husband/father is the MC – you can still detail the experience of the wife/children on the train and in the camp – running alongside his actions (whilst he’s doing this..they are experiencing that..), as I assume he does everything he can to get them released, and possibly doesn’t know that they were gassed until some time after (and possibly isn’t revealed until towards the end of the film) it still fits well with his overall (assumed) dilemma – who are the enemy and who are the allies, and who can save his family (and what will he do to secure their safety)? Well worth developing further.
See lessBased on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer?s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”
Firstly, following the comments I am confused about the main character - is it the wife, or the husband? If the wife (and children) were gassed soon after arrival, then the husband is your Point of View (main character) and I assume the movie is about his personal and growing horror of what is happeRead more
Firstly, following the comments I am confused about the main character – is it the wife, or the husband? If the wife (and children) were gassed soon after arrival, then the husband is your Point of View (main character) and I assume the movie is about his personal and growing horror of what is happening – it is no longer an ideology that he is committed to, but a horror – and he is now living it. I agree with Nir – I find the concept of a family mistaking a train bound for a death camp as anything else unbelievable – but this is based on a true story?
See lessIn direct response to your logline – I’m unsure of the word ‘vain’ – I don’t see it as pivotal to your story. In an earlier draft I think you used the word ‘decorated’ – I think it works well as it implies his commitment to the Reich, which is pivotal. For your logline, do you even need reference to the train?
A decorated Luftwaffe officer on holiday with his family experiences the true horror of the Nazi regime when they are mistakenly sent to a death camp (STOP, or continue) – in the horrific weeks before the armistice (??) (STOP or continue) the enemy becomes his greatest hope.
When her 40 year marriage abruptly ends, a professional Nurse impulsively accepts an invitation to caretake a 400 year old cottage on a small Greek Island, to discover that between the eccentric locals and her complicated housemate the journey back to self is far from peaceful. #For Meetup
I've considered that Lee, but thanks to the movies you've mentioned I hope the way has been paved! Much of the comedy would be lost with a younger cast, so it is pivotal.
I’ve considered that Lee, but thanks to the movies you’ve mentioned I hope the way has been paved! Much of the comedy would be lost with a younger cast, so it is pivotal.
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