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  1. Posted: January 24, 2014In: Public

    When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.

    JayK Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 12:17 pm

    He is totally absorbed by online games and his porn soul mate. His hidden skill (which he has to uncover and modify for the real world) is solving games/puzzles. He can "detect" by identifying patterns and solving puzzles that no one else can see. Perhaps he is almost a Rainman type of savant, who sRead more

    He is totally absorbed by online games and his porn soul mate. His hidden skill (which he has to uncover and modify for the real world) is solving games/puzzles. He can “detect” by identifying patterns and solving puzzles that no one else can see. Perhaps he is almost a Rainman type of savant, who seems “useless” but who alone is able to track down and save his love.

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2014In: Public

    It's February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.

    JayK Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 11:51 am

    I have a problem with "the rich". If it is in a relatively small town, rural setting I picture a very desolate situation where the Depression has leveled everyone into the category of "not rich any more". I think your morticians would be more likely to find relatively rich folks in an urban area. ThRead more

    I have a problem with “the rich”. If it is in a relatively small town, rural setting I picture a very desolate situation where the Depression has leveled everyone into the category of “not rich any more”. I think your morticians would be more likely to find relatively rich folks in an urban area. This, however, entails a different Gothic than the one you are contemplating. Nonetheless, I believe these desperately warped folks need to move the entire “undertaking” to Hell’s Kitchen.

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  3. Posted: December 12, 2013In: Public

    I would like to note that I am collaborating with my brother, username God.Rains, on the same project; and we are very grateful to all who have given us feedback since he first posted our logline. We apologize for not replying to dpg's latest comment sooner than now, but we have to do all of our collaborating by phone. To respond to your latest comment, dpg, we do want our story to be character-driven; so your comment was very valuable and appreciated! After much discussion, here is our latest draft: "Transported with a group of his peers to an otherworldly gallery of paintings that become portals to strange worlds, an unpopular teen must overcome his insecurities and lead this band of misfits back home before the sinister evil that brought them here entraps them forever." Please continue to give us your honest and valuable feedback!

    JayK Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 30, 2013 at 10:30 am

    "Sinister Evil" >>> personify, objectify: "The Painter"

    “Sinister Evil” >>> personify, objectify:
    “The Painter”

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