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  1. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Adventure

    A secret government test places 3 children that have been raised with no human contact on a deserted island to see how they develop.

    Jennifer Feuerbach Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 27, 2015 at 4:44 am

    What were they raised by? It's cool but presently too vague.

    What were they raised by? It’s cool but presently too vague.

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2012In: Public

    A bullied, outcast teen exacts revenge at a Halloween Haunted Prison by commanding the evil spirits of the violent inmates that died in a riot there fifteen years earlier, only to discover that his lifelong nemesis is really his illegitimate brother.

    Jennifer Feuerbach Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:24 pm

    Alright, I can't get the story out of my head. Steve, are you on linked? I swear I won't steal your material.

    Alright, I can’t get the story out of my head. Steve, are you on linked? I swear I won’t steal your material.

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "Three immoral characters enter a playwright contest. The trio decide an emotional story would deliver them a sympathetic win. And what is more emotional than the Holocaust?"

    Jennifer Feuerbach Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:18 pm

    I don't want to rain on your parade too much. There's a lot of good stuff that could go into this script. This is a VERY risky thing to do. There is a saying that "There's no business like Holocaust business", and the people will be acused of emotional exploitation. Plus the Holocaust has been preseRead more

    I don’t want to rain on your parade too much. There’s a lot of good stuff that could go into this script.

    This is a VERY risky thing to do. There is a saying that “There’s no business like Holocaust business”, and the people will be acused of emotional exploitation. Plus the Holocaust has been presented a lot in film and it doesn’t have the pull it once did (unforntuately, we really shouldn’t be allowed to forget it).

    You need to give either the project that they are doing or the characters them selves a redeeming quality. Right now this sounds painful to watch.

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