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  1. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Biography

    The true life story of a poor African-American man who escapes gang life, becomes a real estate millionaire, then succumbs to crime, spends 17 years in prison, earns a Ph.D. behind bars, and after his release reinvents himself as a mentor to troubled youth.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 1:14 am

    Were you planning on showing the history in flashbacks? Shawshank Redemption style? I see the 17 year Healing period, if you will, as much of an inner journey, mixing it with visuals from the past may use the visual medium well. If so, there are probably elegant ways to reflect it in the logline. VeRead more

    Were you planning on showing the history in flashbacks? Shawshank Redemption style? I see the 17 year Healing period, if you will, as much of an inner journey, mixing it with visuals from the past may use the visual medium well. If so, there are probably elegant ways to reflect it in the logline.

    Very curious what the truly experienced logliners can make of this.

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Biography

    The true life story of a poor African-American man who escapes gang life, becomes a real estate millionaire, then succumbs to crime, spends 17 years in prison, earns a Ph.D. behind bars, and after his release reinvents himself as a mentor to troubled youth.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2018 at 2:13 pm

    How much was he able to avoid the crime around him , before his lucky break? Was he able to stay clear? Was he dragged in in his youth?

    How much was he able to avoid the crime around him , before his lucky break? Was he able to stay clear? Was he dragged in in his youth?

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Biography

    The true life story of a poor African-American man who escapes gang life, becomes a real estate millionaire, then succumbs to crime, spends 17 years in prison, earns a Ph.D. behind bars, and after his release reinvents himself as a mentor to troubled youth.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2018 at 1:42 am

    When an ex-gangster, turned millionaire, falls back into crime, he must reclaim his noble life purpose during 17 years in prison. Something like that?

    When an ex-gangster, turned millionaire, falls back into crime, he must reclaim his noble life purpose during 17 years in prison.

    Something like that?

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