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  1. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Biography

    The true life story of a poor African-American man who escapes gang life, becomes a real estate millionaire, then succumbs to crime, spends 17 years in prison, earns a Ph.D. behind bars, and after his release reinvents himself as a mentor to troubled youth.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 11:56 pm

    Sounds like an excellent story. Needs formatting to a logline, though.

    Sounds like an excellent story. Needs formatting to a logline, though.

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Thriller

    Re-edit When two girls are kidnapped a psychology student believes it is the same man who took her and her sister fourteen years before. Fixated on a witness to the crime she follows and kills him.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 7:06 pm

    When a kidnapping survivor, convinced of rescuing others from the same perpetrator, instead kills an innocent, she must.... Or depending on how your story goes When a kidnapping survivor is convinced of being the only one able to rescue others from the same perpetrator, she must chase down and killRead more

    When a kidnapping survivor, convinced of rescuing others from the same perpetrator, instead kills an innocent, she must….

    Or depending on how your story goes

    When a kidnapping survivor is convinced of being the only one able to rescue others from the same perpetrator, she must chase down and kill him.

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2018In: SciFi

    re-edit After his wife is murdered a brilliant scientist travels back in time again and again to try and save her, slowly mutating into a hideous monster. He uncovers his wife?s secret life and in his anger kills her. Grief stricken he returns one more time to change the past

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 4:25 pm

    Tricky. He need to save her. Keep himself from killing her. Was that the original cause of death? I?m assuming, you have a way for him to un-monster himself before the last attempt? Or does he have to do it in monster mode? A time traveling scientist, repeatedly attempting to stop his wife?s murdereRead more

    Tricky. He need to save her. Keep himself from killing her. Was that the original cause of death? I?m assuming, you have a way for him to un-monster himself before the last attempt? Or does he have to do it in monster mode?

    A time traveling scientist, repeatedly attempting to stop his wife?s murderer, has one last chance, to stop a mutated version of himself.

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