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A married womans’ affair threatens a small town family honor her young son, confused and hurt murders his mothers’ lover, leaving a protective grandmother to take the blame
Pretty much rephrasing what Nir said lol:While it sounds like you have an interesting story in mind, don?t forget, that loglines are a very specific tool, for a few specific purposes. Are you sure you studied the formula Karel Segers has prepared?When this happens, this person has to do that (to achRead more
Pretty much rephrasing what Nir said lol:
While it sounds like you have an interesting story in mind, don?t forget, that loglines are a very specific tool, for a few specific purposes. Are you sure you studied the formula Karel Segers has prepared?
When this happens, this person has to do that (to achieve and or avoid this pr that).
Kinda. Very basically. Also important to pick one main character.
See lessA former lone wolf blackwater operative is forced back with his team to stop a terrorist organization from getting a mythological artifact that could destroyed the planet.
This might be useful. In a different creative art, my teacher insisted on always knowing ?what you want?, ?why you want it? and ?what happens if you don?t get it.? To be specific with it, ideally, personal so it means something to you or you understand it deeply at least. For me this applies well toRead more
This might be useful. In a different creative art, my teacher insisted on always knowing ?what you want?, ?why you want it? and ?what happens if you don?t get it.? To be specific with it, ideally, personal so it means something to you or you understand it deeply at least.
For me this applies well to loglining and writing characters in general.
I?d also like to read how they?re stopping them, more specifically.
Regarding your character, what do think of:
disillusioned, ex-[insert favorite type here] operative, turned lone-wolf
See lessWhen a corporate party is interrupted by overdosed terrorists, a party member races against the clock to save the others and the building before going blind and losing the building in an explosion that could wipe out half the city and the tracks of the terrorists.
Ok, fair enough. How about something like this? When a corporate party is violently disrupted by armed drunks, a timid employee, left for dead, must find reluctant allies and the courage to fight back, before losing his mind to the drug keeping him alive.
Ok, fair enough.
How about something like this?
When a corporate party is violently disrupted by armed drunks, a timid employee, left for dead, must find reluctant allies and the courage to fight back, before losing his mind to the drug keeping him alive.
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