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When a broke musician is accidentally locked in a wine cellar with a rich beautiful socialite, he desperately attempts to woo her (and her wealth) before somebody comes to their rescue.
I?d find it a nice extra touch if there was immediacy to his problem. Maybe, not only is he broke, but...? He?ll be kicked out of his house tomorrow? A huge debt is about to be collected? His band is about to split up, unless he can fork over some money? Just some thoughts for extra spice.
I?d find it a nice extra touch if there was immediacy to his problem. Maybe, not only is he broke, but…? He?ll be kicked out of his house tomorrow? A huge debt is about to be collected? His band is about to split up, unless he can fork over some money? Just some thoughts for extra spice.
See lessAfter recruitment, a DSA agent takes on the toughest cases that are thrown at her, while trying to maintain a relationship with her handsome, yet computer-nerd boyfriend.
Oh, and unless the way she gets her cases is crucial for the story, I?d completely ditch ?that are thrown at her? no new info, nips on your word count.
Oh, and unless the way she gets her cases is crucial for the story, I?d completely ditch ?that are thrown at her? no new info, nips on your word count.
See lessWhen the catholic church misunderstand his intentions, a simple devout have to endure the aggravating opposition if he is to fulfill his vow. –The given word
Hmmm. Sounds tricky indeed. Maybe bring it back to basics? First: What is your protagonists main action?
Hmmm. Sounds tricky indeed. Maybe bring it back to basics? First: What is your protagonists main action?
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