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When a fragile single girl wins a holiday vacation at 28, she has 3 weeks to go into a meaningful relationship or risk relapsing into depression
Is the exact age important? Else maybe, ?fragile single woman?. The time-limit seems useful. Is that length of the vacation? Can you tell us more why this is her last chance against depression? We could always clearer, stronger stakes, and a more cutting incitive event, as variable said.
Is the exact age important? Else maybe, ?fragile single woman?. The time-limit seems useful. Is that length of the vacation? Can you tell us more why this is her last chance against depression? We could always clearer, stronger stakes, and a more cutting incitive event, as variable said.
See lessWhen an adrift M?ori minor is stuck in state care, he must befriend a benevolent pedophile to escape the unjust social welfare system of the ?60s.
I can?t offer any help and don?t think you?d need much more. If anything, maybe you could add an additional adjective to describe the boy?s noble character, but that might make the logline less streamlined. The original and suggestions read great. Just really wanted to say, this sounds like an amaziRead more
I can?t offer any help and don?t think you?d need much more. If anything, maybe you could add an additional adjective to describe the boy?s noble character, but that might make the logline less streamlined. The original and suggestions read great.
Just really wanted to say, this sounds like an amazing and meaningful movie!
See lessAfter recruitment, a DSA agent takes on the toughest cases that are thrown at her, while trying to maintain a relationship with her handsome, yet computer-nerd boyfriend.
Meaning to investigate: how can it be stepped up one in the logline? Character quirk? strange circumstances?, ... I smell, this can be upgraded from a show people like to one they love and come back for conventions years later.
Meaning to investigate: how can it be stepped up one in the logline? Character quirk? strange circumstances?, … I smell, this can be upgraded from a show people like to one they love and come back for conventions years later.
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