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An astrophysicist embarks on secret mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war before an enemy tribe turns his people against their own.
Third attempt, more focused on the core story: When a young, self-centered astrophysicist is entrusted with the fate of his people, he risks his life to find them a new home before an invading army lays waste to their dying planet.
Third attempt, more focused on the core story:
When a young, self-centered astrophysicist is entrusted with the fate of his people, he risks his life to find them a new home before an invading army lays waste to their dying planet.
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Here's an updated version, based on the feedback: A hot-shot astrophysicist embarks on a fateful mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war that broke out when his and another tribe became stranded on a dying planet.
Here’s an updated version, based on the feedback:
A hot-shot astrophysicist embarks on a fateful mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war that broke out when his and another tribe became stranded on a dying planet.
See lessAn astrophysicist embarks on secret mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war before an enemy tribe turns his people against their own.
Great feedback. Thanks guys. I'll keep working on it.
Great feedback. Thanks guys.
I’ll keep working on it.
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