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When a down on his luck handyman tricks a wealthy amnesiac into believing that she's his wife, he must find a way to be honest, and she must learn to be a housewife and mother, as they fall in love.
That's why I posted it in the "Classics" section.
That’s why I posted it in the “Classics” section.
See lessA meticulous hitman unwittingly becomes a tool in a complex scheme of revenge by a woman he regards as nothing more than a one night stand.
I dig this. You could either go Noir or Action with it. It has a lot of potential... I think you need to make the protagonist more active. I read your original logline, as well as your revision. The revised one is better because you're focused on ONE event, but you still haven't really given your prRead more
I dig this. You could either go Noir or Action with it. It has a lot of potential…
I think you need to make the protagonist more active. I read your original logline, as well as your revision. The revised one is better because you’re focused on ONE event, but you still haven’t really given your protagonist an action. It seems like he’s going to be reacting rather than taking action. I realize that’s probably not what you have planned, but that’s kind of what the logline suggests.
I think you’re on the right track though. Good luck with this!
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