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A lonely middle aged autistic man's painful journey to spread wings and not slip into a made up fantasy world – after beloved parents violently die in a car accident of his doing.
I like the concept and there's much you can explore with autism. Perhaps tidy up the section after the hyphen and perhaps put it first as the inciting incident? "When his beloved parents die in a car accident he caused, a lonely..." Good luck!
I like the concept and there’s much you can explore with autism. Perhaps tidy up the section after the hyphen and perhaps put it first as the inciting incident? “When his beloved parents die in a car accident he caused, a lonely…” Good luck!
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