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A disgraced scientist sends a message into a blackhole, never expecting the terrifying message it sends back, now he has just days to prove to the world that this time he is right.
I would trim your logline, deleting the last half, that starts with the word now. Leaves the reader wanting more, and is intrigued in what the message has told him. Overall, good work.
I would trim your logline, deleting the last half, that starts with the word now. Leaves the reader wanting more, and is intrigued in what the message has told him. Overall, good work.
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