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Posted: October 1, 2017In: Drama

When a young party-girl?s father is framed and imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him and fool social services into believing she?s responsible enough to care for her little brother.

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Added an answer on October 2, 2017 at 1:25 pm

Age answer...She's 17. Absolutely AWESOME feedback. Thank you all for taking the time to?read it. One goal it is. Now I don't need to fit as many words?into my logline. It's a win, win! ?I love this service. Very grateful. :D

Age answer…She’s 17. Absolutely AWESOME feedback. Thank you all for taking the time to?read it. One goal it is. Now I don’t need to fit as many words?into my logline. It’s a win, win! ?I love this service. Very grateful. 😀

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Posted: August 12, 2017In: Drama

When a 17 year old?s father is imprisoned she must outwit cops and criminals to get him out, whilst fooling social services into believing she can raise a previously estranged 11 year old brother.

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Added an answer on September 10, 2017 at 3:28 pm

Thanks guys. I've changed it up. And it definitely has a strong comedic twist. But Nir, I know you hate the word 'dramedy'...Lol, so I'm too scared to use it. ?Anyway (tee hee) here is a different, but correct, spin. "Determined to gain custody of her estranged little brother, a hopeless young womanRead more

Thanks guys. I’ve changed it up. And it definitely has a strong comedic twist. But Nir, I know you hate the word ‘dramedy’…Lol, so I’m too scared to use it. ?Anyway (tee hee) here is a different, but correct, spin.

“Determined to gain custody of her estranged little brother, a hopeless young woman enlists her imprisoned father?s nutso employees to fool Social Services into thinking she?s responsible.”

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