joeislove – Reviews – Logline It!

Posted: July 17, 2012In: Public

When a teenage hitchhiker under the protection of an obsessed tracker is kidnapped by the same pack of werewolves he is hunting, his only chance to resuce her requires him to suppress his hatred and form an alliance with a rival pack.

Added an answer on July 18, 2012 at 2:36 am

Thanks for the comments. This log line has gone through a lot of iterations already, which is how I think it got so muddled. My original was actually more like the one you had, but after a couple dozen responses, I think I fell into the trap of trying to fix every little problem that was pointed outRead more

Thanks for the comments. This log line has gone through a lot of iterations already, which is how I think it got so muddled. My original was actually more like the one you had, but after a couple dozen responses, I think I fell into the trap of trying to fix every little problem that was pointed out. I’ll work on simplifying this one again.

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