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After years of watching from the wings, a determined young artist sets out to make her place on the world?s stage..
Have a strong inciting incident with some stakes, but don't drop the "wallflower" trait. How does our protagonist make the world her stage? Does she meet anybody of significance that helps her along the journey? What are her views on fame and fortune? How does she deal with all the initial attentionRead more
Have a strong inciting incident with some stakes, but don’t drop the “wallflower” trait.
How does our protagonist make the world her stage? Does she meet anybody of significance that helps her along the journey?
What are her views on fame and fortune? How does she deal with all the initial attention?
Something like this can work as a story if there is a lot at stake and with an interesting journey.
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I agree with dpg that the story has promise, but I think it would be better for the protagonist about to work her shift to create a stronger conflict. FWIW
I agree with dpg that the story has promise, but I think it would be better for the protagonist about to work her shift to create a stronger conflict.
FWIW
See lessA lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.
This sounds like a good idea that can be put on the screen. The idea of having a lyncanthropic warrior teaming up with a human princess is interesting, but does the former have a past with the latter or is it their first time meeting in the story? Who is this mysterious knight? Is he undead,Read more
This sounds like a good idea that can be put on the screen.
The idea of having a lyncanthropic warrior teaming up with a human princess is interesting, but does the former have a past with the latter or is it their first time meeting in the story?
Who is this mysterious knight? Is he undead, sharing similar traits to our protagonist, or…?
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