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  1. Posted: October 6, 2021In: Drama

    Two British academicians, a Christian girl and a Muslim Pakistani man fall in love with each other and decide to live together but an appalling incident changes their lives forever.

    JohnAlen2025 Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 9, 2021 at 3:48 am

    The logline doesn't make clear how and/or why their difference in religion is an issue or if it even is an issue. And an "appalling incident" is a very broad term that could be just about anything. Is the appalling incident connected to their religions or is it something random? It's not clear.

    The logline doesn’t make clear how and/or why their difference in religion is an issue or if it even is an issue. And an “appalling incident” is a very broad term that could be just about anything. Is the appalling incident connected to their religions or is it something random? It’s not clear.

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  2. Posted: October 8, 2021In: Thriller

    When a mysterious stranger hires an adept journalist in a mind investigation firm, he discovers the shocking truth – his life is but a dream world wrought by his new boss, Satan, and forced to choose between his lover and career.

    JohnAlen2025 Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 9, 2021 at 3:40 am

    A bit confusing. It's not immediately clear what a "mind investigation firm" is. It also isn't clear how the "shocking truth" that he's living in a dream world connects to having to choose between his lover and his career.

    A bit confusing. It’s not immediately clear what a “mind investigation firm” is. It also isn’t clear how the “shocking truth” that he’s living in a dream world connects to having to choose between his lover and his career.

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