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When obsession turns to murder, writer Joe Pittman must find and stop the one responsible for turning his dreams into a nightmare, before his secret can be revealed.
Thanks for the feedback guys. You were absolutely right - lots of words but nothing really said. "When his agent is killed, a troubled writer with a dark past must find and confront an obsessed fan before they can kill again." seems to work bettr.
Thanks for the feedback guys. You were absolutely right – lots of words but nothing really said. “When his agent is killed, a troubled writer with a dark past must find and confront an obsessed fan before they can kill again.” seems to work bettr.
See lessRobbed of her childhood after a tragedy, a young woman struggles to get her life on track. After a passionate romance, she finally begins to see a future for herself, but her past makes her a danger to everyone she loves and she must learn to heal before her future is taken from her too.
It feels like there are two warring loglines here. I'd develop the first sentence into your logline, maybe something like: Following a childhood tragedy, a young woman's life spirals out of control and so she must learn to heal before she again hurts those who love her the most. This could be writteRead more
It feels like there are two warring loglines here. I’d develop the first sentence into your logline, maybe something like: Following a childhood tragedy, a young woman’s life spirals out of control and so she must learn to heal before she again hurts those who love her the most.
This could be written as a drama or even a horror (my favourite) and I’m intrigued to find out exactly what the story is about. I think it just needs a little streamlining.
All the best
See lessJP
Robbed of her childhood after a tragedy, a young woman struggles to get her life on track. After a passionate romance, she finally begins to see a future for herself, but her past makes her a danger to everyone she loves and she must learn to heal before her future is taken from her too.
It feels like there are two warring loglines here. I'd develop the first sentence into your logline, maybe something like: Following a childhood tragedy, a young woman's life spirals out of control and so she must learn to heal before she again hurts those who love her the most. This could be writteRead more
It feels like there are two warring loglines here. I’d develop the first sentence into your logline, maybe something like: Following a childhood tragedy, a young woman’s life spirals out of control and so she must learn to heal before she again hurts those who love her the most.
This could be written as a drama or even a horror (my favourite) and I’m intrigued to find out exactly what the story is about. I think it just needs a little streamlining.
All the best
See lessJP