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  1. Posted: November 27, 2014In: Public

    A young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.

    Josh Villemure
    Added an answer on November 28, 2014 at 2:49 am

    Yea... its actually for a comic book :p And well he can't possibly know how bad and bleak the future is. But I set it up so we see it within the first five pages of my first script. But basically if that future comes to be, and he is the catalyst for it, the world will be in ruins, his friends dead,Read more

    Yea… its actually for a comic book :p

    And well he can’t possibly know how bad and bleak the future is. But I set it up so we see it within the first five pages of my first script. But basically if that future comes to be, and he is the catalyst for it, the world will be in ruins, his friends dead, and evil will be ruling (for what purpose, still working that out. Got how it will end, just don’t know if I want that empty: We will rule it all – especially when the world is in ruins, what is there to rule? You know.

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  2. Posted: November 27, 2014In: Public

    A young man discovers a journal from the future (writen by a future version of him-self) and makes it his mission to attempt to prevent the events that lead to the apocalyptic future from happening; such as mutant fly attacks, alien invasions, zombie infections, evil clones, time vortexes and activists.

    Josh Villemure
    Added an answer on November 28, 2014 at 2:49 am

    Yea... its actually for a comic book :p And well he can't possibly know how bad and bleak the future is. But I set it up so we see it within the first five pages of my first script. But basically if that future comes to be, and he is the catalyst for it, the world will be in ruins, his friends dead,Read more

    Yea… its actually for a comic book :p

    And well he can’t possibly know how bad and bleak the future is. But I set it up so we see it within the first five pages of my first script. But basically if that future comes to be, and he is the catalyst for it, the world will be in ruins, his friends dead, and evil will be ruling (for what purpose, still working that out. Got how it will end, just don’t know if I want that empty: We will rule it all – especially when the world is in ruins, what is there to rule? You know.

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  3. Posted: November 25, 2014In: Public

    When a rejected talking golf ball loses his original owner, he teams up with his new friend to enact revenge.

    Josh Villemure
    Added an answer on November 27, 2014 at 5:20 am

    What is his new friend? Man? Golf ball? Why does the talking golf ball want revenge? What happened that made them separate, and is it something the talking golf ball really needs to get revenge with? After years of success, a talking golf ball is (unknowingly?) (replaced? rejected?) by his partner.Read more

    What is his new friend? Man? Golf ball?

    Why does the talking golf ball want revenge? What happened that made them separate, and is it something the talking golf ball really needs to get revenge with?

    After years of success, a talking golf ball is (unknowingly?) (replaced? rejected?) by his partner. Down on its luck, the ball seeks to return to the golf scene no matter the cost! <- This could make it interesting, cause if shows the determination of the ball, and how far it is willing to go. When it meets the "friend", it will make us question the intentions of the ball. Does the talking golf ball see this "friend" as friend or a means to an end. And is revenge its ultimate goal? or just the enjoyment of the game? Good path of discovery in this, not to mention making the golf ball seem more dimensional.

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